All Comments on 'Making Love'

. . . an erotic account of a sexual encounter. I would have enjoyed it even more if you had fleshed out the characters a bit, both psychologically and physically. But you write really well, and I hope you keep it up.

I really cannot stand the word cunt,or for that matter pussy,please do not use the word cunt again,otherwise i liked the story

Seriously read this as if you had not written it?

You will get better with time,hot story from a hotar-----

i wrote this story a long time ago, based on a real experience, i literally just cleaned up the grammar and spelling and posted it on here. i know its not the best story, i like some of my others a lot better. and i'm sorry but if you dont like certain language i use, i'd advise you not to read most stories on this site because almost all of them use those words

This makes me c*m all the time

-naughty little bunny