All Comments on 'Maria'

A very well written non-consent story that evokes strong empathy for the victim of the rape and conveys Maria's plight with realism through the internal monologue as the scene unfolds.

It will be interesting to read comments by female readers of this story.

When the attacker has her neck in the crook of his elbow and his other hand over her mouth, it is not possible for her arms to be pinned to her sides. Simple basics such as this take away from an otherwise decent story.

i agree that the physically impossible aspects detracted from the story, but all in all it was a good read

I really got off to this story. I read it yesterday and jerked off as soon as I'd finished. Gonna do the same again but just had to let you know how much I liked the story first.

Perhaps a minor edit will stop people complaining about the arm position thing in one of the early paragraphs :)

Thanks again for such an exciting story, Jessi. Keep it up

well i m a female reader........i can say that yes its an exciting story bt only to read i dnt think it will b good to feel for any girl

So brutal. So hot.