All Comments on 'Maria's Abandon'

Wonderfully done. Builds nicely. The words take the reader to orgasm along with the characters. Very erotic. Please write some more like this.

This story led me to your others. This is by far the best. The subtle tension between Tim and Maria is beautifully played out. Let's have some more of Maria. She rocks!

Terrific!!!

agree, best yet, the slow build up (except for slightly awkward beginning) is wonderful, and we really get the feeling of her excitement about being an exhibitionist..great writing.

I read this a long time ago and just found it again. Another one I need to bookmark. Thanks for a great story. I loved letting my mind wander in it.