All Comments on 'Mary and her Lovers Ch. 07'

by jawanaut

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arousedmindsarousedmindsalmost 11 years ago
hey . nice series

loving your stories. loving your slutty wife Mary. but could you let me know in advance, how many parts are there in all. due to work its not possible for me to be on literotica regularly. and i dont wanna miss your and mary's adventure. do let me know so that i can follow it later. thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Well.....

Ya know... I liked chapters 1&2. you did real well.Chapter 3 you cut off his balls and gave them to his wife. Now, every chapter has made her more of a (slut) your wording. While he's become such a helpless little wimp of a husband that there is no way any woman would or could see him as anything remotely close to being a man. Right now they both are stuck in another rut. Wasn't that why they started this life style in the first place? Are you (as the author) ever going to give him back his balls? And his wife? If this continues they wont be together very much longer, and she will begin treating him like he isn't worthy of her love or her body. They already aren't having enough together time, to reconnect to each other. Let alone shareing their feelings. How long before the other shoe drops? To bad you can't let him stand up and keep his self respect. Oh well..... just another cockhold story.

m48gunnerm48gunneralmost 11 years ago
Hey....does

Does he ever make love to his own wife...seems as if she is screwing someone every night and never doing him? What is wrong with that picture, no matter how excited he is about his "slut" wife, seems as if they should be spending some time together, she is always out screwing someone else...what kind of a relationship is that?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
more? there's more?

So...from here we escalate to three or four cocks, then 10, then 25, where the giant black cocks and the energetic college boys fuck her into oblivion again and again, and again....

Etc., etc., etc.

Finally, she full on turns and becomes a full time cock hound, can't ever get enough and either goes into porn or becomes a full-time professional (that's prostitute, for them as likes straight talkin'). Next, he gets jealous (finally!), because she's never home, gets grouchy when he wants to cuddle and/or complains about never getting any lovin'. She rolls her eyes and says, "Whatever, asshole. I need way more than you got".

Then he gets real mad, they fight and she moves out.

Wow, what a great time they had! But now, it's over.

Likewise, when will this vacuous vortex of a tale be over?

jawanautjawanautalmost 11 years agoAuthor
To all the commenters

First, I'd like to say I only delete the comments where all they do is bash the story, the author or the lifestyle, and with intense vulgarly. If you do not like the story (like a previous comments said) why are you commenting on the later chapters? You have obviously managed to read this far, and the story line hasn't really changed... so, why the mean comments now?

Second, I left chapter 8 open, as it is the last one I've written... based on feedback, I may or may not continue on with this piece.

Third, for those that asked why the husband doesn't have sex with the wife, I merely left that part out, as I didn't see it fitting into the story, and assumed it was understood that it does happen. I never gave any indication that it does not, and added 'several weeks later' and 'about a month past' into the story.

Lastly, for those that say the husband is not a "man" and the wife will eventually leave, obviously speaks from inexperience with this lifestyle. Don't like it? Don't partake, that simple. Do your research, if it bothers you that much. It is possible to love more than one person at a time, and marriage has not been based on fidelity through much of history. Love is only neurons firing in the brain, and a better word would be lust and attraction. Those things do not last, the majority of the time, so what we're left with... complacency. You have to find someone you can share more than physical acts with.

Also, it is worth pointing out, not all cuckolds go to extremes and carry over their bedroom habits into real life. If it's fun to play around, and watch the other play, why not do it from time to time? It does not make either involved love each other any less. If you honestly believe this type of scenario would make the other leave, for whatever reason... you are dead wrong. This story is written from personal experience, with minor things changed, as they happened a long time ago. I am still with Mary, and we do still "play", albeit not nearly as much as we used to, but on occasion if the situation presents itself... well.

*Side note - sorry for the tense issues. I didn't find out about the editor review part of Literotica until I had already submitted several chapters. My next piece I write will be given to editor review before I submit.

Imagine73Imagine73almost 11 years ago
Great Story!

I think you did a very good job of describing not only the hot sex, but the emotions involved in the situation as it develops. Both yours, and your wife's. All very realistic, and believable. Stimulating, and hot. I really enjoy the whole series. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
ME

I love your stories .

I do think Mary is being unfair to you as not telling you every detail of her evening out . I think she should of stayed with you and watched the video together and filled in parts so you did not have to imagine them.

My hubby and I do the same but I share him as he shares me and we tell every detail after . I try to have my hubby meet the guy before I date him and if for some reason he don't like him then I don't see him . has only did it one time and I am glad he did as he was a real jerk . We found out he had been arrested a number of times as a sexual abuse but had gotten away with it but the last one he did not and in in jail now for the next 8 years.

I knew the last lady and he messed her up real good I felt very sorry for her .

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