All Comments on 'Mary on the Road Ch. 01'

Rather than apologizing for it, why didn't you just EDIT it? You weren't on any kind of deadline. This is just a hobby. Take the time to make it something you are proud of. Many people are just going to ignore your future stories if the one they read is poorly done. We can forgive previous stories as there is always a learning curve for all of us, but now you know better...or should.

I totally understand. It was lazy of me to bring it here like this. At this stage though I'm just trying to bring over all my stories, just as they are. It's hard to convince myself to redo or rework with an old story when I have so many new ideas I'd rather get to.