All Comments on 'MaryAnn Loses Her Virginity'

While this story had potential, it was shot down by stilted prose and barely believeable situations. And the ending... well, it looked like you forgot to finish deleting something, maybe. Let's revise this story and see if we can improve it. Shame not to try.

What a treat to read something that didn't have the obligatory penis dripping with pre cum, or a woman's looking at a guy and instantly getting hard nipples. This was completely believeable and erotic beyond belief.

The author weaves a story with tremendous imagination and class. One of the very best I have read in literotica.com

Don't know what happened with the ending, but other than that the story was good, and I thought believable. I knew an Admirals daughter once - hot little firecracker that wasn't interested in her fathers reputation. Hmmm, such good memories.

Her virginity, that is. It seems she gave it away. The ending seems as if the word processor put back a few paragraphs that should have gone somewhere else. Good story anyway.

Love the "planning" and "monitoring" of her own development!