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by BlueFish11

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BuzzCzarBuzzCzarabout 10 years ago

I gave it three stars. There is some good writing there but it seems you had a not fully formed, or at least not completed, idea. Continue? re-write? Please keep writing.

mel_pomenemel_pomeneabout 10 years ago
You write well ...

... and this was a most enjoyable fragment. Sadly, that is about all it was - far too short to convey what you wanted and needed to say. Please consider rewriting and expanding it into something that shows your talent to its best advantage.

Thank you - three stars - and please keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Too brief and isolated. What there is is well written, but the slice is too thin to enjoy.

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