All Comments on 'Mated Forever Ch. 09-12'

you have improved greatly over the last couple of chapters, the story seems to be flowing better. keep up the good work and keep that imagination of yours going, looking forward to reading more from you very soon.

I must admit, this would have been a much more enjoyable read if there weren't so many grammatical and spelling errors.

keep it coming!!!

This is a really really really great story. I really wish you would update soon.

please oh please continue the story....its SOOOOO good!!!

It just irks me to no end to see stories unfinished after 2 years,,,why even bother to start,,,get a following,and just NOTHING.....It seems so common on here anymore.I think you should be made to post only FINISHED stories,,,,just totally so not right....

Ohhh come on finish the stories. All the you have written. Please! !!!!!!

Good while it lasted.....such a waste of readers time,,to get this far and then,,NOTHING,,another one added to the unfinished story list,,they need a section we can send these to,so others avoid getting caught up and then dissapointed with no ending,......If you cant finish it,,DONT START IT.....

I. Wish you had finished this story.