All Comments on 'Melvin's Magic Love Juice Ch. 03'

I hope Melvin has a nice long run. Maybe some lawyer twin action in the future?

At first, the character names kind of bugged me, but now they seem right for the tone of the story. The Olivia sex scene was a hoot, and I totally didn't see her moments of self-doubt coming afterwards. This chapter was really good too. The uptight lawyer, a pizza girl with purple hair, and Melvin - too funny! But pretty hot, too - the way they all behave and think while having sex somehow rings true, as incongruous as that seems. That's probably how they would act under the spell of the love juice.

I can't believe some of the earlier chapters got bad reviews. I wish I wrote half as well as you do. Love the characters and their quirks.