All Comments on 'Mental Manipulations Ch. 05'

by cuninglinguist61

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ResidentWeavilResidentWeavilalmost 10 years ago
Welcome back. Nice return

This chapter was a bit confusing. I may have to reread the story but it seems to be veering off into some sort of thriller. Not a bad thing but I didn't see any of this coming.

Also, the wife is not a very understandable character for me. Why did they marry? What does she know about him?

Still, it was a short but fun read. Thanks for continuing this. I look forward to more

insert_nameinsert_namealmost 10 years ago
good series

Ive been enjoying these - the plot is developing well and the sex is still great!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
next chapter ?

good read but sort of left hanging a little now need the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
hooray

I've been hanging out for the next installment

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

If my knowledge of the church is correct, then deacons are the only members of the church allowed to marry. Something is up with the pastor.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
We want more

Hey, when is the next one coming?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
more please

I have enjoyed the first 5 chapters and look foward to the next installment please hurry

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
no more?

Nearly 5 months since the last plot. I don't think there's coming more. Too bad.

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
disjointed, insufficient introduction, not enough to work with to make

a story about good brood stock for family consumption. Poor Sarah needs to develop a backbone. and our protagonist needs to grow a pair.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Punishment for the pastor

I think he should make the pastor watch as he fucks his wife then dominate the pastor but making him a cock sucker or making him take it in the ass by his wife fucking him with a strap on

MarkT63MarkT63over 2 years ago

Just tell the pastor to give all his money to Jake, then stop breathing!!!

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