All Comments on 'Metamorphosis Ch. 04'

I like the slow steady, she is still unsure but willing to keep trying, pace of development. It has a true to life fel about it; the bells and whistles really don't always go off the first time or every time. This could be the beginning phases of a story that could last a long time with intermittent installments that seem to come like gifts. Good job.

having sex with an asshole just because her guy wants it and she can't even say no. real shit. she should really leave and find a guy who loves her.

But then that's what gets this writer going. Why is this is in LW? It is clearly an IR story. Put the story in the right section so people can avoid IR fetish stories.

Well, the answer to that question depends upon whether you live in a society that regards the race of those inolved more important that the fact she is a wife.

The real point is this guy was a sexy jerk.

I for one think she should go with him and his friends. Keep this going it is turning into a great series, and at the right pace. Good writing.

Sick cuck and whore, ir story hidden in LW.