All Comments on 'Michael and Jessica's Sexual Slaver Ch. 05'

Very happy to see this story continue. This saga has a great bdsm dynamic. Sean is determined but not omnipotent. Michael is uncertain but undefiant. Jessica too is uncertain, but deliciously excited. Psychologically, the characters still surprise themselves with their own, and each other's, reactions. The pace is wonderful too. The couple is sinking slowly into a submissive dreamworld, but not drowning, at least not yet. The effect is very erotic.

Glad you're continuing the story, can't wait for more.

Really love the pace and detail of the story. Really like how you are examining each persons feelings and perspective and the story unfolds. Really like all the little kinks and personalities you have given each character. I particularly like how they still are a loving couple and make love to each other but get the sex from Shawn. Would love for Michael to also pleasure and be pleasured by Shawn. Please continue to write more for this story line. I am greatly looking forward to the next chapter.

absolutely love this story. cant wait to read about all of their humiliations!!

I love how your last paragraph ends with Shawn in most stories of him plotting more makes me think of a stereotypical villian. And tomorrow we'll take over the world. But I'm loving this series so far great writing

not really, but it could very easily be in the 'How To' listing.. I am loving it.

Love it, great story, sexy and exciting...