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Click here(How can you be so sure? How do you know?) Joeve asked.
Michael smiled at her. (Trust me, I know!) And Joeve knew that he did.
(Michael, how do you do this?) She asked, referring to the mental link they had established.
(I can’t tell you now. Are you ready to go in?)
Shuddering, Joeve shook her head. (Just hold me for a few minutes. Please!)
Once again, Michael held her gently and caressed her tenderly. And once again, she wished that Michael was her father. She felt his embrace and she felt his caress in her mind, and she found herself returning almost to normal. Finally, her eyes met Michael’s, and she nodded. They both exited the car, and arm-in-arm, they entered the emergency room.
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- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 4 years agosome good moments but generally unfocused, unsatisfying and inconclusive ...even the title has little to do with the story
WayPast21about 6 years agoIt was fun, for a moment, to be reminded of my own youthful fascination with the mechanics of a bra strap. Otherwise, it was a nice middle of the story. The beginning was presented in such a way that I felt the author saying "yeah, yeah; that's why, now here's the stroker part." The ending never happened, we were left at the door of the hospital without hearing her reaction to the big reveal after hearing her reactions to everything else in the story.
Oh well; maybe there will someday be a rewrite and extension of the story. I look forward to that.
bigguy323over 11 years agoIt begs for several more chapters.
LustinTranslationover 12 years agoI'd read this story before but couldn't remember until I reached the bottom of the first page. I couldn't stop and had to read the whole thing again!
I like the philosophy he had regarding his powers, very noble. Even without powers if the world would treat each other with the same respect, it would be such a great place to live.
This is a story that could continue on for many chapters and many more experiences. Not trying to ruin a good thing, but the possibility of Joeve not being able to handle the "mind tricks" and running from him sending him into a dark period where he uses his abilities with a decadent flourish and then rebounding back with another "true" love, lots of potential there. Maybe I've just been reading too much of the darker stuff, I don't know.
It's a great story and like I said, I enjoyed it just as much the second time!
