All Comments on 'Minnesota Winter'

by 2snakes

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FRSWRITERFRSWRITERabout 12 years ago
nice

moves to fast for me, but ya got all the right stuff in there, put some more play in and i think ya got it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
you take my breath away

rather than "you have taken my breath away" in paragraph 3

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