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by TiltAWhirlTemptress

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Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassalmost 14 years ago
Nicely done

Short and erotic. Good luck in the contest and keep writing.

DorlaMoorehouseDorlaMoorehousealmost 14 years ago
Very hot!

Yay for modeling stories! :)

You should definitely write another chapter - I want to see the narrator meet up with Cindy again!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
awesome

that was great.you got to write a second chapter and get these two together again or anything just keep wtiting

littleblackdress50littleblackdress50almost 14 years ago
Nice job

Very nicely written. Good luck in the contest.

Irish_countryIrish_countryalmost 14 years ago
WOW!!!!!!!!!

your story is very HOT, would lovr to read more...Thank You your new fan Kelly

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