All Comments on 'Mother-In-Law Pay'

this story needs follow chapters telling of how you used her or her asking and begging for you to use her. may be you have an older business partner or someone you need help with and you make her service them to win them to your side

The story was weak and rushed. There is tons of room for improvement. The plot needed to be developed slower. It could have taken a couple of nights of watching video in anticipation of catching her. Everything basically neededto be as lower down. Plus there needs to be many more chapters

WHERE is the rest?

I don't get it. Why does he want to cheat on his wife with a fat disgusting old bitch like that?

Read not a good one but still a read. Good luck on future stories.

Are you more angry at your mother-in-law, or at your readers? Why subject innocent readers to something as revolting as this excuse for a story?

If you had her picture, then you'd really have your revenge!

I don't get why he would do that to his mother in law if she is as ugly as he claims to be and he hates her that much, i just don't it