All Comments on 'Mother Nature'

Sweet and hot - a good combination. Good luck in the contest.

As usual doll you wrote another hot story. I hope you win this contest, as I gave you a 5. XOXOX luv yahs!!!

I love your sense of playfulness in the story. It shows the love more clearly than any other elements. The only reason I didn't give you a 100 is not because I didn't love it but I feel there is so much more in your writing waiting to come out. So keep on writing, you got a fan here!!! I love story where there is description of the feeling where he reach the point of ejaculation and the woman point of no return on the slippery edge of mount Orgasm.