by kandie
I love your sense of playfulness in the story. It shows the love more clearly than any other elements. The only reason I didn't give you a 100 is not because I didn't love it but I feel there is so much more in your writing waiting to come out. So keep on writing, you got a fan here!!! I love story where there is description of the feeling where he reach the point of ejaculation and the woman point of no return on the slippery edge of mount Orgasm.
As usual doll you wrote another hot story. I hope you win this contest, as I gave you a 5. XOXOX luv yahs!!!