All Comments on 'Moving Day Ch. 01'

by Michael36

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
lov it

That was so HOT!!! U got to finish the rest of the story. I can't wait to here if there is a possible threesome. Maybe both of them sucking his cock?

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
MORE! MUCH MORE!!

Sure hope you don't leave this one hanging - so to speak!!

sacksackover 19 years ago
super little story...

PLEASE continue!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Word Choice

Great story & Gave it a "5"!

Question: In the following line, is "masturbating" the proper word choice? Can you do that to someone else?

"Natalie never stopped sucking and masturbating my cock into her mouth even when I started to lose some of my hardness."

Can't wait for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Damn it man! Where's chapter 2!? Good story.

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