All Comments on 'Mr. Fantasy Ch. 01'

Loved this story, really well written, thank you.

That's some spicy story. The meters above need a 110. Good stuff-thanx

This story could be the dictionary definition of "Erotic." Very good writing, well told story in a short amount of space. It kind of made me think of O'Henry! Very realistic and stimulating. I love a tease. I hope your write MORE!

hope that this isnt it. keep writing, i cant wait for the next chapter... dont let such a talent go to waste... XxOo

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High school virgin writing. Please get a story. Good luck

Well I thoroughly enjoyed it.