All Comments on 'M's Desires'

Don't let bad comments stop you. There are some of us out here who like love in our master/LOVEslave relationship.

Hey! I really like the plot and the story for the most part. It kept my attention. One suggestion that will really help: be consistent with how you address the audience. Is the audience "you" or are they reading this story as a third person. Sometimes you refer to the female character as "you" and sometimes as her.