All Comments on 'Ms. Margo'

Was that it was garbage. Complete drivel. And a waste of time to read. Could you have made them any dumber? Lacking any type of compelling writing, I found nothing clever, interesting or entertaining in the entire story. Geez, where have all the decent writers gone?

Big fan of this story I think you did a good job. And I never comment so this is my first time commenting so to me it was one of my favorites.

Good but all te ciggarettes added 5 pages

Great story; what is Ms Margo’s phone number? Ha ha

Nobody is THAT dumb. Even in fiction. Just awful writing.

It always amuses me that people who know nothing about writing comment on how bad a piece they simply don't like is written. For a writer as talented as lyzunchik, however, your ignorance of the difference between you're and your is a little appalling. You're means "you are" and should not be confused for the possessive "your."

Great story. Love the transformation.