All Comments on 'Ms. Margo'

Great story. Love the transformation.

It always amuses me that people who know nothing about writing comment on how bad a piece they simply don't like is written. For a writer as talented as lyzunchik, however, your ignorance of the difference between you're and your is a little appalling. You're means "you are" and should not be confused for the possessive "your."

Nobody is THAT dumb. Even in fiction. Just awful writing.

Great story; what is Ms Margo’s phone number? Ha ha

Good but all te ciggarettes added 5 pages

Big fan of this story I think you did a good job. And I never comment so this is my first time commenting so to me it was one of my favorites.

Was that it was garbage. Complete drivel. And a waste of time to read. Could you have made them any dumber? Lacking any type of compelling writing, I found nothing clever, interesting or entertaining in the entire story. Geez, where have all the decent writers gone?