All Comments on 'Music To My Ears Ch. 02'

by Mythrana

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rgraham666rgraham666almost 19 years ago
Good one Mythrana

You're doing a great job of building up the characters.

Each is quite unique and their emotions and thoughts are well described.

Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Keep it up!

Peter sounds like a jerk. And yes, it sounds like he was the one who sent the thugs!

Good captivating story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
a set up

given how Peter has acted since his "friend" was attacked,

i wonder if the orignal beating was a set-up, a la Tanya Harding?

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