All Comments on 'Mutual Orgasm Denial Ch. 01'

too many ->_>_>_>_>_> disrupts the story if there was one !

This was a great story, I loved how you told both sides. And the building anticipation was fantastic. Each side if the story getting shorter and shorter made for one hell of a build up.

Original and kinky. I like the idea of her being a selfish Domme and only making him wait a little better to be honest! Great writing tho, thanks for sharing!

j

Very nice written!