by Egmont Grigor
I like some of your stories well enough like this one. If only you weren't so obnoxious with your remarks whenever anyone showed the slightess dislike about your stories. Remember, everyone has a right to his or her view. If you put on the comment button, then be prepared to be blasted or praise.
In this case I think not because people dislike your stories but more of your attitude. I could be wrong but then that's my opinion and my feelings towards your style you project.
and shows promise for a full series,
but why did you just cry halt?
talk about coitus interruptus!