by hafnium10
Still very good and enjoying it! Some tense and phrasing errors in the chapters so far but no biggie really. Nice to see theres a few more chapters! (...and I *love* asian girls;)
With all these feelings of love and lust combined, perhaps another chapter or two could be written with them starting to want to make a baby and make their lovemaking into something more permanent?
Story telling at it's best! Waiting for additional chapters.
:-)
The way you wrote that chapter was beautiful. I like the way you described the seduction between Kyle and Stefanie. I like the statement that she said where she felt like a real woman again because of Kyle. It would be nice to see these to get together and stay together if that's what you write next in the storyline. I can hardly wait for the next chapter.