All Comments on 'My Darkness'

by Tinymage

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
i like

very hot. please continue this

coldcomfortcoldcomfortover 14 years ago
Wonderfully short and sweet.

I usually like quite a lot of background in the stories I read, a chance to get to know the characters. I will however make an exception in this case. This was a real 'hit and run' type of a story. the way you write the sex and the passion was superb. Like your narrator, I was left wanting more, always a good sign.

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