All Comments on 'My Haunted House'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Good Start

I thought the story had a good start but when it finally got hot it ended. I thought you were gonna take the kids one by one as they came in and explored your house but instead you just had the one schoolgirl.

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