All Comments on 'My Life as a Sissy Step-Son Ch. 01'
by circlejboi
- 17 Comments
Anonymousover 11 years agoSorry, but I generally like gay incest, or bisexual incest....But this is just terrible. I hope you don't continue!! 1 star!!
Anonymousover 11 years agoAnonymous you where far to generous; 1 star really.
Circlejboi please stop writing.
Anonymousover 11 years agoI thought it brilliant, and I am looking forward to the next installment. Don't let the misery aunties put you off, I thoroughly enjoyed it, five star's worth!
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoIt was a good story n the plot n climax was ok but what killed the story was the misspelled words and words being in places they dnt belong
Anonymousalmost 11 years agowhen i was 16 i went out with a guy on a dare.He was only supposed to "suck"me,but apparently he saw something in me that I had only wondered about.Before he finished sucking me he had two fingers in my tight little virgin pussy and I was riding them like a hot little cowgirl.
Anonymousover 10 years agoIt says to be continued, where is the next part? It's really good, just has minor spelling and grammar mistakes. I need to know what happens next between Charles and his sissy son. Love sissies and incest so much. I imagine them making love often and showing Chris all these amazing things. At some point, the mother will catch them but Charles will leave her and run away with Chris.
Anonymousover 9 years agoYour story consists mainly of sentences beginning with Charles (or Chris) does X. Consequently, it feels more like a screenplay, than a story. You need to step away from the X's and O's of the scene and write about what they are doing, as opposed to stating what is happening. Build in some transition points and try not to start paragraphs the same way (e.g. Charls does...).The dialog, unlike most stories, is pretty solid and believable. Moreover, there is some real heat here. It's a decent first attempt.
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoThis story made me really hard all the time even if its my second rime to read this its still makes me want to cum without even touching my self... Anyway Im still waiting for the continuation of the story.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoWish I had a big cocked black step daddy to catch me dressed up and fill my faggot pussy with his seed.
Anonymous6 months agoProof read!!!!! I got lost in the bad grammar and lost interest. This is poor writing. I am turned off!
Anonymous4 months agoLoving this so far and looking forward to the next chapter and how he becomes so much more feminine does she start help doing the chores in the house or maybe starts dressing more feminine ...does she become a sissy daughter for her Mom also ?
