All Comments on 'My New Girl? Ch. 01'

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MrBeagleMrBeagleover 12 years ago
Great Start

Loved chapter 1...keep going

jonathan8739jonathan8739over 12 years ago
Great Story

Can't wait to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

loved it..looking forward to part 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Loved it, can't wait for the next. Love a romance with the sex.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Different, But

in a good way. The addition of the romance is really nice. I don't often read this category but when I do, it's nice to find a story like yours.

I would say I'm looking forward to the next chapter but it has already posted, so I'm off to follow the adventure!!!

oralfriendoralfriendover 12 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

To all who have read and commented on my story; thanks! I hope you will enjoy the remaining parts, all of which have been submitted.

9/19/2011 5 PM CDT

toni49toni49over 12 years ago
nice

real nice start will be reading part two real soon

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Awesome

Very nice to see romance.

griffin57griffin57almost 11 years ago
very nice.

Nothing wrong with romance. I feel the same way. Check out 'Best Friends Again'. You will find more of the same. Going to read more of your stuff.

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