by Chiara23
This is just such a heart warming and beautiful story... thank you!!
I really enjoyed reading this story, you should continue for one more chapter at least.
I really enjoyed this story about a couple that really fell in love and everything turned out great
I like the story so far but that anal sexscene was total bullshit! If he couldn't get in her before at the house then there is no way in hell he's going to get in her out by the lake with no lubricant. Not happening. He'll tear her and she'll be bleeding and shit wont heal right and it'll be even worse next time. Ass fucking stories should be left to either someone who has had their ass fucked or is sitting next to someone who had so they can get good and bad information from someone who has been there.
sex scenes could be a little better, but its a great story of 2 people falling in love. i gave it 5 stars
I really like the style of writing and balance of erotic writing versus believable story line. Looking forward to the next chapter.