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Click hereA few minutes later, watching her uncoil from the car when parked across the street from the Lillehammer's house was even more fun. It was a very nice house in a fairly bourgeoisie neighborhood, and the guy across the street was trimming his topiaries in the fading daylight as we arrived. He ruined two of them before he just put the shears down and stared at her. He was lucky he didn't lose a finger.
I knew this reception was not going to be boring, but at that point, I had no idea how unusual it was going to be....
- COMMENTS
Jackspeed2uabout 3 years agoSuzanne is my friend again...
I would like to see Lara, Suzanne and Robbie start discussing how a long term forever type relationship will work. What would it look like, how would it function? Who would Robbie marry, if anyone.
That would be interesting. Sooner or later a woman wants assurances greater than just a promise.
Anonymousabout 8 years agoIs the author from CA? Only people from CA refer to a freeway as "the 280". Everyone else will say I-280, or just 280.
Anonymousover 8 years agoSo incredibly real I guess is what makes it so unreal... not making any sense, but damn this story just compels me forward ravenously!
JasonRTaylorabout 9 years agoSo many things about how you write just make me smile. I love how you write in Engineering terms, it brings such a genuine voice to the protagonist, as well as the effort you put into your scenes and locations.
The slow, steady and unpredictable development of the Suzie Signal has been really fun to watch, especially how clever he has been in finding new ways to use his 'only talent' :)
The whole pledge story arc just blew my mind with how much work you put into it, the houses and their many personalities, Robbie definitely got a great view of college life.
Your characters are so richly developed! Characters like Dwight, who aren't even daily players are still 'people', someone I root for and look forward to seeing re-enter the main plot-line.
The workout with Saskia blew my mind, definitely showed how Robbie is going to get the super physique - Honestly! :)
Oh those girls. Lara and Suzanne make me question Robbie's sanity in even looking at other women, but adding Candy into the mix? oi... heart fluttering ;)
Thanks for the excellent writing, I've had so much fun reading all the way through (twice!) and am patiently returning monthly to look for an update.
I hope all is well on the other side of the screen,
Jason
Anonymousabout 9 years agoThe command of English (apart from the rare homonym confusion), the details of Texas (as seen by a Houston resident), the technical details, the multiple plot lines "in play" -- all serve to make this an extremely rewarding read. (I have just completed my second complete reading of the series to date.)
More installments, PLEASE!
Anonymousabout 9 years ago"Obsceen garbage !!
The worst. 1* !"
"I rarely give 1* , but this one beats the lot !
"1*" !!"
We got your message the first time reject, no need to post again two days later.
Have you checked the user ratings and feedback for MOT, if you had you would realise it is one of the most popular stories on Literotica. ridiculous comments like yours make you look like an idiot.
Anonymousabout 9 years agoHat's off to you - keeping these plot lines going is keeping me engrossed! Keep em coming!!
