All Comments on 'My Own Heaven Ch. 19'

You are a sick MF

WOW! That was helpful. What was it that you didn't like? The writing style, the things that happened in the story, or that you needed someone to help you with the big words?

I suspect that your comment would have had a bigger impact if you told the writer what you didn't like. If you don't like this Genre (BDSM) - DON'T READ IT!!!!!

I liked the story, maily because it was something different. How many times can we read about a slave kneeling in the doorway "waiting for her Master". Give me a break.

Keep on writing Danisub.

Wow, "walk the line" is very creative. I have never read anything like that before. I also really enjoy how you have both Heather and Tina and describe their different preferences as subs. They are so lucky to have Doms who fit them so well! Also, I love the romance behind every "game." Well Done!

I love the different situations in each new chapter. I also love the way the girls shared experiences are helping them to develope each others submisiveness. Keep up the excellent thread.

Your best story to date

for anybody to complain it shows how sick they are.i have so enjoyed your stories they leave me wanting more. please please keep going.

"Sir" was fine, but "Daddy" is not.

This is spoiling the story for me.

I know of too many people whose lives have been fucked by "fathers" not worthy of the title "Daddy".

I agree, the "Daddy" term is really turning my stomach. The link to pedophilia is too strong. Sir, and Master are totally cool with me. On a better note, the rope torture was VERY outside the box, no pun intended. I get tired of the same old torture techniques every author has used a billion times. While this sounded very uncomfortable it was different and kinky nonetheless. Reading on....