by sluttyflasher
If this was your first submission, you are on your way to being very good. The story was clear and well written. The topic was a hot one and got me very aroused. Continue the story please.
I loved the way you let us see into your thoughts - it seemed very REAL and genuine. I could visualize you "exercising" and your progression from "teasing" to "flaunting" was very believable (and VERY HOT!)
I look forward to hearing more of your life experiences and I look forward to reading about you being a little slutty too
Being a nudist, exhibitionist and adventurist myself, I totally sympathize with your need to be yourself. I love your writing style. It flows freely and is very easy to grasp. Oh, and I wish I was your neighbor ... :-) ... Looking forward to more submissions!
Would have loved to be one of your neighbours. You told us about your feelings during the progress of this story and that made it excellent. Hope to see more of this story very soon