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Click hereSarah had pulled a tissue from her purse and was busy wiping the cum from her cunt lips and where it had dripped down her legs during their exit. When she was satisfied she wouldn't leak all over Ashley's leather seats she climbed into the passenger seat.
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The sun had just started to rise but the sand was already beginning to become hot. The long white sand beach was almost empty save for a few people playing in the surf. I decided to take a run.
I set a rather quick pace, the sand was harder to run on than I anticipated. My soles sunk into the soft ground and after thirty minutes my calves were getting sore, so I turned back.
I decided to sprint the last hundred yards and finally stopped out of breath and sore on the beach in front of the resort. I flopped down into the warm sand and let my breathing slow.
"The sands a little uncomfortable for running on don't you think?"
She'd approached quietly while I caught my breath. I turned at the sound of her voice.
"Yeah, absolutely," I stammered. "My calves especially are a little sore."
She looked to be in her early twenties with blonde hair tied in a ponytail. Her eyes were hidden behind a pair of large aviator style sunglasses. Her breasts strained against a small bikini top. She wore a pair of tight shorts that accentuated the curves of her ass.
I forced my eyes to stop staring so lustfully at her body and vowed to buy some sunglasses at the gift shop.
"I'm Brittany." She smiled.
I introduced myself and forced myself to my feet, brushing the sand from my shorts. I shook her hand.
"Would you like a massage?"
I stared at her for a moment confused. She laughed and then gestured towards a small stand up the beach.
"They're only ninety-five dollars. Great for relaxing muscles after a run in the sand." She smiled at me again.
I hesitated for a moment.
"Sure." I smiled back. "That would feel great."
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Ashley gave Sarah a chaste peck on the cheek.
"Thanks for coming over to check on me."
Sarah nodded and gave Ashley a soft smile.
"Call me if you need anything, or if there's anything I can do."
Ashley smiled. "Thanks, I will."
Sarah slipped quietly out the door. The sun was beginning to set. Ashley had spent much of the day in bed and her chat with Sarah had drained her.
She padded softly to the kitchen and made herself a small salad with what vegetables were left in the fridge. She made a mental note to stop by the store to buy some basic groceries after her appointment tomorrow.
She slowly rinsed her bowl in the sink and headed back upstairs. She passed her bedroom and made her way back to his office. She turned his computer monitor back on and curled up in his chair. She was nervous, but ready for her appointment the next morning.
- COMMENTS
26thNCover 5 years agoAshley really screwed up. Husband probably shouldn't take her back. Foolish woman.
betrayedbyloveover 9 years agoNow we have the details. However it added nothing to the tale. It seems we could have went from ch.1 to ch.3 without missing anything, I will continue...
Lickideesplitabout 11 years agoWith the flashbacks, we see a lot of duplication of aspects of the story which are not in question, or which are not terribly vital to the overall development of the story. Each one COULD have been formatted so as to be immediately obvious as a flashback, but it honestly did not take long to figure it out, especially on later flashbacks!
The story is getting more interesting as we get into it more!
roscovichover 12 years agoThe writer must be a teenager. There is no point to dissect the story. It is what it is,as bad as it is. It is low skill of the writer that should be considered. Mayhaps when she grow-up the writing would be better. As it is--1 star.
norcal62almost 13 years ago"The LW Long Distance Runner."
Others here mention the common themes of LW stories and this has the most common one, the male tucking his tail between his legs and running off to avoid confrontation. Pretty sad writing.
machandsomeabout 13 years agoYou told the same dumb ass story like three times and told use nothing! Get a life or at least finsih the story!
Agoodman954almost 14 years agoDespite the the flaws that we all have to some extent in our own stories there are some who just can't resist throwing a few stones at a fellow author. Remember we are (for the most part) amateurs here. We do this for the pure enjoyment of writing, having our story's told, and for the chance of stimulating and entertaining the readers. On those counts alone I'd say this story is very well done. For those of you who have never tried to write a story ... take you best shot and try, you'll soon find out it's not as easy as it looks. As for my fellow authors... I'm sure you will agree with me that constructive criticism is always welcome but vitriol serves no point. One last thing Pistolpackinpete good job with the use of CAITIFF I'm impressed.
Pistolpackinpetealmost 14 years agoa legitimate intervention. And it was absolutely a little awkward, because it had no introduction really. Eminently readable plot so far. Tough call on recon. No torchable offenses I'd say, but her actions definitely warrant unilateral divorce offensive. Then again, the treacherous,lecherous,pusillanimous caitiff (there I go being a "pseudo-intellectual again!") did swallow foreign cum, never having extended said hospitality to her supposed "spouse". This just may incite the scorched earth team into mobility. Hope I don't have to endure how he meets a babe to wash away his ills within mere days of the revelation. Hope I can find an engine for the 4-runner.Hope they plug that damn hole too, but not before it lays some tarballs on the beaches of Long Island. Then you'll see some action baby.
