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Ben and Susannah opened their eyes slowly at the same time. They could see the strong light of day around the edges of the heavy curtain covering the hotel window. They could also hear the shower running in the bathroom, and the clear sounds of two people having sex. Lilly and her boyfriend were both moaning quietly, the sounds of their wet skin slapping against each other coming clearly through the closed door.
"They're having sex AGAIN," Ben complained with a laugh. "They're like rabbits."
"Says the guy who came three times last night," teased Susannah before kissing him softly on the lips.
"Good morning," he said with a sleepy smile after their soft lips had parted. Lilly whimpered sharply and Susannah's head turned towards the door. "You want to go watch them?" Ben asked.
"No," she said, her blue eyes turning back to meet him. "All I want to watch and see is right here with me."
"Awww," he teased, "What a cute line."
"You want to go watch my sorority sister having sex in the shower?" Susannah asked.
"No," Ben replied. "From now on, all the sex I care about is the sex I have with you."
"You promise?"
"I promise. Do you?"
"I do."
Ben's hand ran over the smooth skin covering the firm swell of Susannah's ass and tried to slip behind and between her thighs.
"I'd love to fool around," she whispered to him, "But I really have to pee and those inconsiderate people in there are hogging the bathroom."
Ben laughed his deep, throaty laugh.
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It was a full week before the first day of sophomore year, and the dorms had just opened. Ben heard a soft knock at his dorm room door and went to answer it, unsure of who else even knew he had returned to campus early. He was wearing just a towel and peeked curiously around the door after he had opened it. Intense anger flashed across his face when he saw Olive standing in the hallway.
"What do you want?" he asked coldly.
"I'm sorry to bother you," Olive responded, her hands clasped nervously in front of her. "Is Susannah in there? I was told she was with you."
"Even if she is, I don't think she has any desire to speak to you," Ben replied.
"Please, it would just take a moment and it would mean a lot to me if I could just say something to her," Olive said, now looking at the ground and avoiding eye contact with Ben.
"Hold on," he said before shutting the door.
When the door opened again, Susannah was standing in the doorway, wrapped in a bed sheet. "What do you want, Olive?" she asked curiously.
"I'm sorry to bother you," Olive repeated, her eyes looking nervously into Susannah's. "I don't know if you've heard, but I spent the summer in a counseling class coming to terms with... Do you mind if we talk inside the room?"
"I don't think I want to be in a room with you right now, Olive," Susannah responded. "What do you have to say?"
Olive paused, looked up and down the empty dorm hallway, and then continued. "I've received counseling for my... sex addiction. I realize that my treatment and understanding of sex has been unhealthy. I used sex in unhealthy ways, and I fully realize that I've hurt others, in addition to myself, with my behavior. I've come to tell you that I'm very, truly sorry for everything I... did to you. I realize that what I did was wrong and I hope that you can forgive me."
Susannah shifted the sheet around her uncomfortably and then asked, "Why are you asking for my forgiveness?"
"I'm on step twelve of the process," Olive explained, looking down at her feet again. "I must seek forgiveness from those I hurt, for the wrongs that I committed." She paused, then looked back up at Susannah. "I'm really sorry Susannah. Stuff... happened to me a long time ago and... what I was doing was unhealthy. I realize that now, I'm committed to change, and I hope you can forgive me for what I did to you."
When she had stopped speaking, silence hung uncomfortably between the two women. Susannah was thinking back on everything that had happened, and realized that she had mad her own mistakes. Olive had hurt her deeply and she had also helped Susannah hurt herself. But in the end, Susannah had herself been forgiven and, in forgiveness, had found the happiness that was waiting for her in the room behind her. "I forgive you Olive."
"Thank you," Olive replied. "I hope we can build a healthier relationship in this year ahead of us."
"I hope so too," Susannah replied genuinely.
With a smile, Olive turned and walked away down the hallway. With her own smile, Susannah closed the door, turned back into the room, and let the sheet fall away from her body.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 3 years agoThe final chapter to My Sorority Slut is the best yet. The characters are complex and realistic, not cardboard cliches, the plot is engaging and complex, and the overall story is carefully crafted. The ending, which some think too predictable, is eminently satisfying; it is a happy ending which in turn identifies this story, in the ultimate sense, as a great Romance saga. The love scenes in this chapter are in exactly the right proportion to the rest of the storyline, yet in a larger sense this is a meaningless remark, because the plot and love scenes are so interwoven and so important that they cannot really be separated. Rather, they are both part of an intricate whole, which make this chapter an exceptional reading experience. Five stars for this chapter only because six stars cannot be given.
Anonymousover 3 years agoformulaic as hell...to be expected, i guess
english not bad for lit
misplaced apostrophes everywhere - very common
corny troupes, like ¨pulled out with a pop¨ never heard that from pussy or anus in my eighty years so far
football, baseball references all over - who cares - but, us readership.
i still read it...
Anonymousabout 6 years agoThis reads like a prologue to a LW story.
Susannah had a chance to deal with her submissiveness, either by rejecting it or by finding the right person to submit to, and chose neither. Instead she deliberately put herself in *another* compromising situation for the sake of her sorority, and completely blew off Ben when he wanted to be there for her. Her sorority is clearly far more important to her than her relationship to Ben.
From the tone of their current relationship, I'd expect that, later in life, she'll fall into the orbit of some overpowering female at work who drags her down a slippery slope to cheating, while Ben will stand there and watch everything unfold like a helpless wimp, after which he'll take her back (at least the first few times).
If this truly were the prologue to a LW story, every reader would be thinking that Ben was an idiot to marry her, and that he was only getting what he deserved when she cheated on him.
Anonymousabout 7 years agoAn excellent 5+ star story. The author almost lost a star due to the introduction and author's comment. Almost everything described in this story is truth and has happened more than once. Next time please do not provide an introduction that diminishes the story.
Two things I didn't like about the story were the photograph and the lack of discipline for the tool-jocks. They should not have gotten away with what they did to the women.
You did a great job taking the story forward to a good ending for the couple. Several couples I was aware of at university did not survive the oppressive treatment of pledges. Keep up the good work and thanks for taking the time to write a great story.
Anonymousabout 8 years agoThe main issue I have with the story is that the writer seemed to want to destroy the integrity of the main character, Susannah. It started with Susannah proclaiming to Ben that she is not a slut. Then she continued to volunteer for situations which put her in the position of being a slut. But by the end of the story we are supposed to believe that she isn't a slut, and it's all Olive's fault (along with the repressive sorority system). If we were to choose to believe that Susannah is not a slut, then we would have to believe that she is completely stupid.
Combine that with the fact that Ben seems impossibly understanding, and it becomes a little unbearable.
Now, as for some of the comments made by readers; A few seemed to miss the point of fiction. But, the reply from the writer, Spaldan, was the most disappointing. A writer doesn't/shouldn't have to explain any back story. It is a work of fiction. The story starts from the first line and ends at the last. If it wasn't written down somewhere in between, then it's simply not a part of the story.
Since a back story is not a part of the actual story. The writer is not more qualified than any reader to determine the motivations of any character. So "Innuendos" asking if Olive really meant her apology is just silly. The writer answering is even sillier.
Overall, I enjoyed the good parts of the story as much as I disliked the bad parts. And I enjoy the other stories I have read from this writer.
Anonymousabout 8 years agoNot one to pick favorites in "author's" but I do have to say spaldan is my unexpected favorite author and I love reading ur stories and I'm not much of a reader.
P.s. fuk olive lol I hated reading everything she did in this story but still a good story also was a little hurt that "ben" was more than one guy after reading ur post
Keep up the good work \m/ :)
Bob925over 11 years agoHaving discovered My Sorocity Slut two days ago I have to say that I am impressed. The characters are well described and became friends of the reader the story is unputdownable, one is left wanting more, wanting the next chapter, well several more chapters of their lives, as they continue to grow and understand how they, and their partner ticks. Favourite Story: Yes, And now I have read Ashton 1-6, favourite Author. - Now Camping Trip or Weekend Sleepover next, hm.
littleshy425over 11 years agoomg usually stories that are so long don't hold my interest but this series deff held my interests. I loved it kinda wanted more after it was over! looooved it!!!
spaldanalmost 12 years agoAuthorWhoa! Some intense feedback for this story. Like I said, I very much appreciate feedback. I can respect when anyone takes time to write something constructive, even if it was that you didn't like the story. I'm not sure if this is the appropriate place to put a little post script, but this seemed right. This answer also may not be satisfying, especially if you liked the story. So if you don't want the mystique ruined, read no further. But I feel I owe an explanation to those who took the time to read the whole story and were left unsatisfied. I realized at the end of my story that the relationship between and Ben and Susannah hadn't been fully resolved, and I didn't know how to fix that. The main problem was that, as I said at the start, Susannah is based on a real person. Ben is actually a composite of different people. I used "her" experiences as a base and then wound a narrative around her story (her experiences also didn't necessarily happen in the order they happened in the story). What I mostly wanted to do was share Susannah's arousing experiences in a way that readers of erotica would enjoy, and place them in a story that would be enjoyable to read. So the problem was that some really bad things happened between "Susannah" and her "partners," but I really wanted Ben and Susannah in the story to have a happy ending. So yes, in the end of my story, Olive is supposed to be truly remorseful. Again, I don't want to give too much away that could identify the real Susannah, but Olive was also based on a real, truly abusive sorority sister. I made her seem much worse than she was in real life, but the real "Olive" had a serious problem with alcohol abuse. And part of what triggered her alcohol abuse was a really unfortunate sexual experience that left her with a distorted view of sex and relationships. I personally knew Olive, but not as well as "Susannah" knew Olive. Olive went through AA her senior year (which took much longer than the three months in this story- I shortened for narrative purposes) and came out the other side as a completely different person. And while I'm not saying all the non-consensual abuse depicted in this story really happened, the real "Susannah" really did forgive the real "Olive." And I personally think Susannah's forgiveness was related to the fact that her "Ben" at the time had forgiven her for something. If you're outraged, Mary's anger in the story is a composite of the anger vehemently expressed by several real sorority sisters. The real "Olive," although not as evil as the "Olive" in the story, also wasn't expelled from the sorority, over the strong objections of several of her sisters. Much of that had to do with the person she became after AA.
Again, does all this stuff really happen at colleges, or did ALL of it ever really happen? No. This is a story. I acknowledge that there may be some major faults in this story line requiring leaps of logic for the reader. Those are the fault of my inadequacies as an author, trying to weave a story based on the inspiration of one truly unique (and very sweet in real life) woman. I also confess that I write about Greek life as an outsider. I'm not sure this long explanation helps, but I felt I owed it to those of you who had bothered to read my disjointed and less-than-stellar writing for over 20 pages, especially since there were some explanations that I could relate to you from the real life events that inspired this story. If you have any further questions, feel free to send me a message. It goes straight to my real, personal e-mail address. And for those of you hoping for more on this story line, I'm sorry, but I've exhausted the inspiration connected to this material. I'm already off writing another story that has inspired me to ramble on another topic.
Even if you hated this story, I hope it at least got you off :-)
Shyguy22almost 12 years agoThis was a wonderful story. It was well paced and had a real feeling to it. Every chapter built up on the other with ending being satisfying in so many ways. Great Job. :-)
