All Comments on 'My Three Sisters - and Mom'

Was this a fanfic sort-of thing or a fiction or what? I'm confused.

So wordy and oversold, after page 3 I lost interest, the story just got more and more dull, and as I was starting to lose the will to live, I gave it up. No stars

I liked the story a lot . the understand between all them is so close . any chance of more hope so thank you for this story

This is one of the best stories I've read. Hope to see it continued!

Very well written story. Hot when it needed to and sweet and romantic as well.

Yet another great story (as always) ☺☺

Please continue writing as I always enjoy your strories

i think the story was good I liked the fucking that was going on first the mom then the sisters al of them loved to fuck he seemed to love to fuck all of the girls he was living and fucking one of his sisters and the other one he fucked her and then his twine sister he fucked her out of her cherry when mom left the room when they were fucking there was a hint that mom was going to get fucked by her son again I love all the fucking that was in this story

This really got me hard, my dick got harder and harder as a steel log, I really worked it out. My lady loves it when her pussy gets a workout. I got 12 inches at first and it grew to 16 and 4 inches around. Once I cum, it covered my lady's pussy inside and out and over her tits and face.

next please

MISS SONAL G PARAKH,

I AM ELDER DAUGHTER OF MYMOM MRS KUNDAN G PARAKH SHE IS THE MOST SEXEY WOMEN IN OUR HOUSE SHE GET FUCKED ONE OF HER FRIEND MR.SANAJY ROY,HE IS HAVING 9"LONG TOOL WHICH MY MOM GET RAMMED DAILY I LOOK AT HER DAILY WHEN SHE GET RAMMED

ONCE SHE SAW ME WHILE SHE GET FUCKING AFTER FUCKING SHE CALL ME AND TOLD EVERYTHING AND MAKE ME AGREE TO GET FUCKED GRUP FUCKING AND I MAKE MY SMALL SISTER AGREE TO JOIN US AND NOW WE TWO SISTER AND MOM GET NUDE IN SAME BED AND MY MOM GET PREGNANT AND NOW SHE WANT TO GIVE BIRTH TO A CHILD AND SHE TOLD ME TO MARREY TO SANJAY AND MAKE A MOTHER OF THAT CHILD.

PLEASE HELP ME

MY E AMIL IS papiya2011_12@rediffmail.com

tell me what to do only ladies can write me

by order

miss sonal g parakh (roy)

I find your stories are very well written. There isnt a incest story that I haven't enjoyed. I do like the sister and brother stories the most but throw mom into the story just kicks it up a notch. I grew up with three sisters but list my mother at an early age of 15. Ive always thought what it would be like. Ive learn to put myself in the story and it gives feeling I could only dream of. Please keep writing these stories.

Thank you

I truly enjoyed this story vary well written and imaginative too

It made me so hot that I had to call my bf in the night. He did came and made me cum and cum and cum until I couldn't take more.... He also read the story and liked it. Now he and me are searching for a girl to join us. May be a boy too...

Your writing is nothing short of VOLCANIC!! But I agree with other comments about finishing a story, & I am grateful you finished this one! Please keep up the excellent writing. A person who can tell a good story has a treasure to share & your treasure is in great shape!!! THANKS AGAIN!!

Damon it I got pre cum

Wonderfully written story. I don't usually like Mother/Son tales, but this was good enough for it to be part of it, but those sisters are something else !

The worse part about good stories is finishing them, so as much as I liked it, I'm now disappointed I've finished it.

That was 8 pages of sheer joy, I've got 3 sisters, but they're nothing like these 3 , sadly !

Anyhow, thanks for a really hot story !

These sick perverts caring about the sensibilities of each other like normal people is a laugh. Pretend all you want but they are just like ALL of us sick perverts reading this shit. Just try readers to stand on your high horse, but we are perverts all!

Great story. Worthy of several readings. If ever to be turn into a video/movie, opinion of mine is brandi love plays the role OF the mother! Amanda bryant as the twin sister??? Lol.

must make a video or movie on this..loved it!!!! awesome work

Wish I had sisters and a mother to fuck everyday

Is there going to be more to this story or is it done?

I'd like to see what will become of them, if they continue what there doing or go there separate ways?

Are we sure that he's not actually a girl?

Would seriously enjoy seeing more of this story. Especially at least to a Christmas get together. Might be a lot of fun. Maybe Jake and Jackie living and loving with each other and getting pregnant. Or all of the sisters and Mom getting pregnant.

However, I hated the guy. He the pussiest, most mealy-mouthed little faggot ever. He must have run out of testosterone growing a 10 inch dick, because all that's left is pure pussy. What a tool.

The storyline and porn were otherwise fantastic!

Greatest story ever, so much respect for the author thinking up something this amazing. Jackie was my personal favorite I live the way she was so cute and inocent, just adorable. I would definetly love to read more of this story it should definetly be continued!!

Loved the story, just as everyone, but all the people still asking for more; it has been a decade.

The author has not been active for several years. Time to let it go and just have it be a good story you liked.

I really enjoyed the story.

Amazing

Really liked it you should consider writing a follow up....

You obviously know how to craft an interesting storyline. Equally obviously you need the services of a competent editor/[proofreader. Your work will only benefit from an upgrade in your mechanical and grammatical efforts. You have great potential, currently unrealized. Only by acknowledging your limitations and effectively f\dealing with them will your work improve,

birds and bee's (bees)

College (college)

State (state)

past time (pastime)

Dawn Married (married)

up state (upstate)

Déjà vu ( déjà)

tid-bit (tidbit)

pre-mature (premature)

hundred's (hundreds)

I could have cared less (couldn’t)

lip-lock (lip lock)

ball-batter (ball batter)

edge-wise (edgewise)

sisters things (sister’s)

brothers cock (brother’s)

them selves ( themselves)

new found (newfound)

stone faced (stone-faced)

little difficult not too (to)

out do (outdo)

mind numbing (mind-numbing)

over come (overcome)

titty's (titties)

already electrocuted prick (STRANGE DESCRIPTION. NOT PARTICULARLY COMMUNICATIVE)

(SHE USED HIS COCK) to pull herself up with into a sitting position (????)

knee's (knees)

talk privately to her sister (our)

WHATEVER IT WAS, Becky would find a way to comfort her or help her through WHATEVER IT WAS (REPETITIVE)

open minded (open-minded)

hang over (hangover)

little girls voice (girl’s)

small little orgasm (REPETITIVE)

Dawn was more than happy to want to do (CLUMSILY WORDED)

my sister's cunts (sisters’s)

here the rest of the story (hear)

Nothings worth hurting (Nothing’s)

spoon-full (spoonful)

her self (herself)

buck-naked (buck naked)

anyway shape or form (any way)

nipple's (nipples)

didn't care any more (anymore)

was still cognoscente (cognizant)

anyone had in deed poked their head (indeed) (her)

toilet-seat drying her self (toilet seat) (herself)

I new that everyone else (knew)

innuendo's (innuendos)

strip-poker (strip poker)

sat the sack (set)

break a part (apart)

never the less (nevertheless)

virgin's (virgins)

sooth (soothe)

way-laying (allaying)

alighting (lighting)

pleasuring the glands (glans)

slowness bordering on lunacy (STRANGE DESCRIPTION. NOT PARTICULARLY COMMUNICATIVE)

maddening decent back (descent) (CLUMSILY WORDED)

cunt-lips (cunt lips)

But get a fucking life!!! Just read the story and enjoy your cock. Give the rest of us a break who don't give a fuck about spelling or grammar. We like the story and we love to masturbate!! Gave it a 5

This story is far from finished . You've left the ending wide open for Chapter 2 . Please don't disappoint us

this story, and manyfeathers' other stories (but not all) have this weird thing going on where the prose is flowery (purple?) and the dialogue tends to follow the style. it is awkward reading the conversations between characters like they live in the victorian era. awkward, jarring, and just plainly weird. who the hell says, "mother, it's coming, it's coming!" during orgasm?

whatever, i knocked two or three off from this story. maybe i'll read it again just for the hell of it. take my 3 stars.

Truly one of a kind ending - uncertain if I agree that busing a virgin should be done via doggy style. Still, I give you credit for your change of pace in how mom assisted her son, who she had taken his virgin dick. Closing out the chapter by helping the young sibling of his twin give up her cherry, likewise her first time with mother's guidance took the large family dong that all the women in the household sampled. One hell of a lucky fellow, was he; earning you five stars. Let's hope that others don't find some reason to be critical - damn, does anonymous ever write stores so we can rate them poorly?

Some of you folks can not even enjoy the beauty of God's creation in a Rose due the natural flaws. Creativity shown by an author should be enjoyed vs a writer using violence, degradation and snuff to fill the pages with tripe. This person is an author who has created a great story that should be enjoyed as a human contribution vs a dry computer generation or the flawless effort of the Lit Teacher that tends to be boring. It is what it is and I enjoyed the creativity shown by this author.

It had so many good accurate details, it was a really good length, and it had me wanting more!

Your an idiot plain and simple. Keep your "stars" this author does not need them.

Suggest you find places elsewhere to make criticisms that no one cares to hear or believe.

The story was simply excellent.

Great story!

I usually scan through long stories but this one was well written and erotic. Very erotic. Hope there are more stories.

Would have been nice if Jackie got pregnant , A perfect ending to a perfect story .

there are not that many family's like that around, I sure wish I was part of one. A well written story, gripping all the way through, are there any more to follow???

meerkat les

Please continue this story!

this whole story took me 3 days to finished

What a fantastic story filled with humor, love, and tenderness. I would love to see another chapter talking about the future.

fantastic story, I hope you can write some more. It seems this bit of erotica has only just begun.

i love this family. i am so happy to have read this and i wish ..............

mom, you rock.

please i want to more of this story will mom still have her baby boy again

I loved the story except for the part about the sisters controlling him and then shoving a dildo up his ass. I skipped through all of that because it started to piss me off.

I love the whole story, but please do go on, seems all three sisters and mother and up fucking with him openly! There will be no marriage in this open erotically motivated family! NICE LOVELY STORY, go on or add up the chapters!!!

Keep going, yoj got alot of story lines there.

GOOD JOB

This story drew me in and kept me wanting to know what was next. Well done. There is another story on Literotica that involves a guy and four sisters, "Just the Six of Us." That story had a much more conflict and had, especially at the end, a wonderful, well developed love story. The love of the twins in this story could be better developed, but this is still one of the best.

It a shame you didn't follow this great story with a sequel and since its 12 years since you wrote it and your last post was 4 years ago I have a horrible feeling we won't hear from you again. Which would be a crying shame. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

bare or just a little strip of hair...NEITHER. I want a woman NOT somebody who looks like a 9 year old. If I don't get a bit of hair in my mouth, I haven't ate real pussy. I want a hairy pussy as it was meant to be...BTW 5 stars

You know what else was meant to be, Wisdom Teeth, but we get rid of those. Acne, hairy backs, leg hair, mustaches, beards, crooked teeth, poor vision, and the list goes on. If you feel like a pedo, that's between you and Freud.

This was truly a "Marvelous. Bloody marvelous" story. I do hope that you will be writing a sequel to this sometime soon now that you're wrist is feeling better; Carpal-tunnel I'm assuming, hopefully from typing and not from wanking it too much. It would be nice to see what the next day will bring for Jake and the lovely women of his family, because didn't the mother did say something to Jake and Jackie about having a "family meeting" in the morning before helping Jake break through Jackie's tough hymen?

Hell yes five stars as I have always given your stories Many Feathers So thank you so much for the stories. I have loved them all.

It was amazing

as all ways Many Feathers you sure can write a fantastic story I really hope that there is going to be a second instalment at the very least maybe even a part 3 hope you keep bringing more of your wonderful writing out for all of us to enjoy

thank you

First Tory I’ve read of yours. I absolutely loved it and it left me wanting more at the end. Which I truly hope you will write at some point. Great job

I love this story great work if there's another part of it i would love to read it

Loved this story. I have work tomorrow and should have been in bed an hour ago. That's got to be a good sign, no?

This person has not posted anything sense 2013. As much as this story begs for more not likely to happen. Great story

No continuance needed. 5*

sissy shaved her cunt and now looks like a six yr old... men are such wimp pussys today. you know I prefer a WOMAN NOT a little kid. I laughed my ass off women ready to marry complaining there NO men around anymore, yep almost all men under 45 are wimps today...and want a little kid...

I really was captivated by the whole plot and story, I couldn't put it down once I started reading it.

This story was so much fun! I put aside some time so that I could read the whole story at one sitting. God, what an absolutely fun story, loved it all the way through. I was laughing most of the time. The author had a nice flow to the story with hilarity thrown in for a much enjoyable read. Thank you very much!!!

Your stories are always great. I just read this one again after I read it awhile ago. Not much I would change, other than the beginning was a little rough to start. Before the mom and son got together, it was needed but it just didn't flow the way the rest did for me. Maybe if it had some conversation or something instead of being a monologue.

No negative comments from me but I would seriously enjoy reading more to this story if you were to continue writing it. Very well done.

Actually I prefer a lot of hair. I don't care for the little kid look, I want a real woman. Anal? not me I'm not gay. If there is a pussy in the room I'm all over that!

Been trying to find another story of where an adopted son has sex with his step mom and sisters gets them pregnant then his step gets into a relationship with his real mom gets here and his half sisters pregnant then a CPS worker. Read it before cant remember the fucking name of it. Could use some help

up his ass!!! YUK!! No chance... Almost quit reading.

Wish I did. Mom coming in at the end was even worse. A close second maybe.

From a 5 to a 2.

Jake is a simp.

If the good lord didn’t intend for us to put stuff up our asses, he wouldn’t have given us a prostate or made them feel so good.

Good story but needs more chapters and to follow on from there.

I have to agree. Your last paragraph opened up the possibilities for more of the story.

With only a couple problems, the story was well written. A few commas were missing, and if you use autocomplete, always make sure it gives you the correct word.

Thanks for the great job.

I am in general agreement. Additional chapters are needed, as the story ends with an obvious opening for continuation.

I enjy the fact that you are obviously at least at collegiate level in so far as your use of the language, your properly constructed single sentence paragraphs a rather strong tell in this regard, reminiscent of reading Tom Jones.

There’s one thing wrong with this story, it’s not finished. Theres so much more to this amazing story. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

We were hoping there would be one more sex scene with all of them together! That's okay, we still loved it.

like a lot of other people have asked please continue this story

Love it wish they made a movie about this..any women ever lived something like this ??

Legally sane, not everyone has sex when their young and first times happen in different ways. Enjoy the story or don't.

⭐⭐🌟⭐⭐ An EXCELLENT story, beautifully prepared and presented, one of the best that I have found on this site. The characterisation of each family member is immersive, you have introduced them beautifully I feel that I know each one personally, your erotic work is beautifully concise avoiding the usual flamboyant language.

The only problem I have with this story is that that you have brought this family through the more at the start of the relationship but have cut them off just as they were starting life together, further chapters are needed to complete this tale.

(1/9/2022) IMO, the beginning was both erotic and funny. The ending was perfect and the best scene in this story. I have one major critique though. I didn't like how Becky decided, on her own, to peg Jake. He was new to the game and basically an innocent. Both Becky and Dawn used him as a plaything, a toy, and not someone they cared about. It seemed to me like rape. What made it worse for me was how the character thought he was surprised but he liked it. Was that an attempt to justify that act of rape? Some may disagree with me, maybe justifying it because this was just a fantasy. But it's how I feel, It’s my opinion.

Wonderful story. That being said MORE!!!!! pLEASE???

Great story, but I hate to break every ones heart, it was written in 05. Read his Bio, nothing since 13, and some kind of medical event ????Stroke???? but still a good story.

First, about "LEGALLY SANE" and the comment about anal sex and men how it turned him/her off...YOU DID NOT HAVE TO SCORE THE STOEY DOWN TO 2 STARS BASED ON THAT! The story is a 5, it is a loss to the author that you drove his rating down like that!

So you do not want to be 'pillaged' that way...okay...keep it to yourself-most of us do not care about YOUR personal quirks in the bedroom!

I, personally, found the entire story to be well-written, with a few issues, but still SO EROTIC AND LOVING. Jake, mom, & sisters cared for each other BEFORE sex was involved, that eventuality just made it better.

Would like to see more added to the story, wonder why "ManyFeathers" stopped writing after being somewhat prolific**5**Stars from me!

Maddogintexas while I won't agree with you about the story being a 5 I will agree with you that it shouldn't be dropped in rating just cause he didn't like the anal sex part of it while I will admit that I didn't care too much for that either but that is not the reason why I didn't give it a 5 the way this site does its ratings 5 is the max rate so means it's a perfect story no mistakes at all however even you said with a few minor mistakes which the story had with that I give you a 4 star rating on this 1 many feathers

Shame it stopped at this point.

Good story. One thing I have noticed with American authors is”I shook my head, yes”. To poms, kiwis and Australians “ I nodded” simply indicates yes or agreement. “ I shook my head” means no or disagreement. Strange the differences.

A fun and well written the characters have good personal identity, the pecking order is ideal, I enjoyed the story. I loved the one sentence ( so are you going to fuck me tee?).

Having a big cock compensates being stupid it seems.

One of the stupidest MCs I ever read in this category.

It's a good story well written. Nothing major noticed problems so very well done good story would like to read more of this group and maybe thru marriage and raising kids and holiday family meetings vacations etc.

Lots of good fucking and enjoyment by all

Absolutely sucking fucking fabulous, four red hot cock crazy and cunt happy sexy women to sex it up with, the lucky fucker, incest is the best sex. Love the girl on girl sex too. I absolutely adore Cunt in every way, especially when fucking one while eating another and fingering a third. The more I get the more I want. I just have to have sex a minimum of three times a day, some times more, if I am only going solo with one woman. If I am with 2 or 3 then I may only have it twice a day. If I am with only one woman we may spend the whole day sucking and fucking.

I have six sisters and have had them all at one time or another, one on one and three together at times, 80 now and still cunt lapping the three youngest from time to time. Cunt crazed fucker UK.

But I prefer a full bush, but trimmed is ok. Shaved is a big turn off for me.

OMG! That is so over the top that it gets all five stars and more if possible. Had me laughing when they were wrestling with the Jello shots. There's still some kid in all of us no mater how old we are. Would love to see how the rest of the holidays went for all of them. Glad there wasn't a lot of debating about the morality of them having sex with each other. I think there was just enough to let us know that it's frowned upon, but in this case, it brought the family closer together, no pun intended, lol.

fucking mom is stupid.......... no stars...........

I enjoyed the story and how things happened and worked out would be interesting to read more.

Good work. Pacing is good and I felt like I saw each of the women separately. Even though some schmuck said the Mom was stupid, I thought tenderness in the story was well done. It's clearly 5 stars.

Superbly done. Well written and good characterizations., Congratulations!

I couldn’t finish your story, got to the jello anal scene and was done, I would’ve been fine with the anal if the MC ever once talked about it or had interest in it previously, the sisters used him as a sex toy in that scene and if I’m being honest all of them were treating him like that, there was no intimacy between him and the others while they showed each other intimacy and love at every turn they only teased and used him. Your writing is solid but the way the virgin MC was treated just rings of abuse and I hope you figure out other ways to treat your characters in the future. 3 stars for the writing and presentation.

EXCELLENT! Nothing more is necessary.