All Comments on 'My Treacherous Wife'

I'm far more curious about the individual who favorited this! Why is this rated as high as it is?

Basically it comes down to translation. In your native language this story is probably, hopefully, witty and riveting. Your translation of it to English was awful, however. Write for yourself. Write for people who don't require translation. When you improve people will want to do the translation for you.

WASTE TIME

WTF! ~ She wheeled him inside on the sliding thingy,things went black,AND?

If he's telling the story after the fact,he's still alive.So what the fuck happened?

Take up reading stories,'cause you certainly do not know how to write them!!!

If nothing else, I enjoyed this for the one moment and line. "I simply love it more than I love you."

Don't be surprised if I totally work that in to a future story of my own.

What the fuck was that and how do I get those minutes of my life back!

you've succeeded beyond your wildest dreams

nor is killing. Why not grab her legs and take her with u?

F@!#$#@%^king stupid. Learn to write in english too. I can imagine what sock lover is for.

Enough said. 1*

WTF