All Comments on 'Naughty Michelle'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
How about that....

...she came,she clawed, she bonked her.(My apologies to Cicero)Pistolpackinpete

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Proofreading works - try it

Spell check only works if you read. You "knew" it once at least - the rest of the time it must have been "new" to you. The story line was good, but spelling/grammar ruined it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Not My Thing

Doing this after a year, don't have kids for a while, if the best sex you ever had was with other people I don't think much of your chances of making your marriage last. Writing O.K.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Good Story, But It Needs Very Serious Editing!!!

Keep TRYING!

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