All Comments on 'Naughty Miss Ch. 04'

it's the end youvw done enough damage!

I just love your stories of normal woman being transformed in to the lowest of the low. Please keep the stories coming...love the street whore thing.

In todays climate, do you really think that no one would ever go to the police ith what they saw? It's not a question of when, it's a question of how many people would go running to the cops, their parents and the media. Transform them sure, humiliate them...why not but to blackmail someone with no choices left to them is stupid! A cornered rat will attack if it has no chance to escape.

Ignore comments which seem to get reality and fiction mixed up darkcloud. I can never understand why people are unable to make a distinction between the two, no one called the cops cos it is fiction! The characters only ever do what the writer tells them, not what might happen in reality. Make the distinction people! While I think Sarah's story has come now to its natural conclusion, I'd personally love to hear more about Becky and specifically what she might have in store for Louise, as you have eluded to. Anything involving females dominating females, especially unwilling participants, and in your own dirty way, sounds just fine to me!

More! More! More!

Thank you - thank you thank you xxx

Great story. I like reading a drawn-out process where the changes are slow, but as certain as can be.

The question, though, is what ever happened to Louise? You promise a possibility, but we're left hanging! I would love to see the high-n-mighty fall.....

So now Miss Price is a whore, is she? Well, it seems to me like she's been a whore all along! Only now, everyone else can see it. What a shame she fell so far, so fast. She hardly had time to enjoy the ride!

YOMEYO

You're a fucking great writer... I was eager to know how it ends, but not wanting it to end... I loved it...

I wouldn't want that to happen to me... But it was great as fuckkk. Makes me want to be a Bitch to my future husband... XD

That's a very good story i would love to read more.on how she gets used both in school and outside and how Becky gets her more girls to work with !

I miss Miss Price, can we have her back?

I definitely would like to read more n how she gets used maybe more in school play and out side used !

sehr geile geschichte, danke.

Thanks for the awesome story! For those interested, there’s more about Louise Laing in the Bike Shed Bitch series 😍