by aznaked
I loved the story line, and the culmination of day at a nite club was a perfect setting.
i hope it continues... great idea on the parents and that the new neighbor was a nudist made for a great plot and gives so many other story ideas
I'm not sure what story your other readers were looking at, but I couldn't get halfway through the first page. Sorry, I just didn't get it. Maybe an editor could help.
It was a very good story. I loved the much nudity in it. It was great to read about the nudists being smooth and hairless....just the way I like it. Hope to read more like this. Thanks!