All Comments on 'Newfound Love Ch. 05'

Easily 5 stars. Incredible detail to their lovemaking. I'm very impressed.

This is a wonderful story, loved it. Will we get to see if they do continue their love affair and get married possibily. I thought it was a relly sweet story. Well written. I also enjoyed your other stories.

WCD

They are so good together. I like how he calls her "princess," yet treats her like a queen. I hope you finish the story soon instead of keep us waiting.

ONCOR! part 6 ? Marcus & Octavia need to be together- having hot blissfull MARRIED sex, baby making practice.

What a good and satisfying story! Done without any vulgarity like other stories.

Too bad one had to dis the weather in MN!! Boo to that Princess!! I agree, IF you are from MN, th Winters defintely are too long!

Hopefully, you will have time to write additions to your stories....I loved them all listening to a woman's perspective is refreshing!! Warmly, TD

It would be so nice to find out how these two are working out. I love how he call her 'Princess' that is a sweet endearment, and yes you did develop both characters equally well. Enjoyed reading this story for the second time. JV

I loved this chapter. I hope that everything works out for them. Please update soon. KC

up the romantic and sensual heat. I didn't know if...when or if they would wind up together, and you mananged to make it a very enjoyable and character driven story that if it ended here I'd be one satisfied reader, wonderful job.

on this couple...I would love to see what happens in the future!

to read another chapter. I hope you continue this story....would love to find out what happens to them after the conference.

that scene was so hot update this story soon as well as mr. right i'm in love with that story