by P4U
That was extremely erotic and thrilling! I enjoyed it (in spite of the fact that you kept mentioning that she had large breasts). Loved the description of the anal scene. Wish that had been me in his place. What a rush! Egad. You gave just the right amount of detail and moved it at the perfect pace. It was the proper length. The characters were believable. Keep writing. I loved it. Can't wait to see more of your product! >;)
Victoria would never give either of the guys a blow job without getting her pussy licked to orgasm. This is not realistic for the day and age of honesty in sex. However, an interesting story, just lacked total oral reciprocation.