All Comments on 'Nightclub'
by lizzystein
- 13 Comments
sandymonroealmost 10 years agoWhat a nice level of submission! Totally hot! I'm eager to read the next part!
klitorisringover 9 years agoPlease tell us more about this slut - part one was hot but way too short :-).
lizzysteinover 9 years agoAuthorThe second part of this story will be added as soon as it has been approved.
Anonymousover 9 years agoEnjoyed the story somewhat, as it is not really my kind of story though! Only noted a few typo's which is typical for Lit stories. Will definitly read Part 2 when approved!
Thanks, Jess
robertreamsover 9 years agoPut off a bit by many omissions and errors, you really should use an editor. Otherwise very hot; a 4.5 on my peter meter. Made me very hard.
Anonymousover 9 years agoI feel very conflicted about this story. It was super hot and sexy, but in no way was the kind of consensual BDSM scene that should happen in real life. It was an abuse story... But it totally turned me on and I feel terrible about it.
lizzysteinover 9 years agoAuthorI hope you do not worry too much. It is a fantasy. The character engages in behaviour I would not recommend to anyone, but one of the delights of fantasy is the ability to be transgressive.
Anonymousabout 9 years agoPractice makes whatever.
billie babkaover 7 years agoWish i had written this....better yet...wish it was about me!
