All Comments on 'Nikki's Awakening'

sounds like a story based on a good first experience thank you for sharing your story

Thanks for sharing this erotic story of your first time. It was well done.

Thanks for sharing this first time experience. Well written and sexually arousing to read. Hope to read more of Nikki's adventures in sex.

Indeed a nice vision, but not filled out well enough. More information and detail would have made it far sexier. Learn how to write conversations into your sexual physical conversations, the result will be even more sexy.

awesome story so very hot and horny.

love the writing so much. a true gifted writer

thats for sure. hope for more the same from you.

So it ended nicely for both and she could tell her cherry, "Bye-Bye." Cute story and I can imagine this being true and descriptive details after giving into sex she'd desired for sometime.

That was SO hot... him cumming in her and her telling him how it was leaking out. Then he pulls her panties back off and goes down on her and she says how he was licking their combined juices! My favorite fantasy!!

I just wish you were the "Nikki" I once knew and loved, and the boyfriend was me.

..., God, I wish.💔

The physical part is well told, including some of her feelings.

What is lacking is her feelings toward him and why she decided for him, which I would think would include some his feelings/attitude toward her.

Dialog is missing. She is telling about herself, but not talking to him, nor him to her.

Good first effort.

Paul in Oklahoma

really good,