All Comments on 'Not Just Another Day at Work'

Your grammer and punctuation are the pits, absolutely terrible! And the story line was absurb. Get an editor and a ghost writer. But then, if you had those two, there would be no reason for you to write, which is OK by me.

As a couple, you are certainly lacking in the ability to put two words together for an interesting storyline. As a reader, I wasted some idle time reading this garbage.

Rubbish from the start to the (fortunately)early finish.

I sure wated my time reading this. This is a moment in time I will never get back! Thanks for nothing.

This wasn't even good reading material to use the bathroom to. No talent whatsoever. If I could have scored it negative, I would have.

Keep writing and stay positive.

That was really good

I love a fast vicious quick shag