All Comments on 'Odd Opportunities Ch. 01'
by SuperfluousOne
- 8 Comments
SuperfluousOneabout 20 years agoAuthorHey readers. Just wanted to say I'd love to get any and all feedback for this story and part 2 as well. Be sure to tell me what ya think. Part 3 is almost completed, so be on the lookout.
hedomanabout 20 years agoI loved it. The build up was erotic as hell and you left us waiting for more. Good job!
Victoria_2001_02769about 20 years agoOk, ok... I get the hint! *grins* Chapter 03 is on its way, bear with me... I'm glad to see Chapter 01 is being so well received, and one reader is wanting more...
You gave me an excellent story line to work with, so any editing was easy. Here's to working more with you in future.
FerretGyrlalmost 20 years agoThis is some of the best work I have read yet, and believe me, I read quite a bit! Keep up the good work T, I'll be waiting for more from you babe! -DMC (CB7)
Anonymousover 19 years agoElise is way too innocent to ever be me but it was very hot. ~ your obscure friend
SuperfluousOneover 17 years agoAuthor...these characters? I know it's been a loooooong time since I wrote this, but I'm thinking about continuing the story series. Anyone want to tell me their opinion? Thanks!
stevieraygovanover 10 years agoFun story, definitely. It could stand a proper editing job, but overall I enjoyed it. In fact, the scene in the car with the girl checking out the guy's huge bulge in his sweats reminded me a bit of my own "Everyone Loves My Ass" story, with the girls teasing Paul in his bedroom about his huge dick.
Like I said, fun stuff. On to chapter two....
bro_souffle2018about 6 years agoGreat stuff - love the detail in your writing from her perspective!
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