All Comments on 'Oh Aunt Martha Ch. 01'

by Vixie1231

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TheSubstituteTheSubstituteover 19 years ago
Very nice story!

I loved the buildup to a very hot climax and I hope you will write more about these ladies.

mummys dirty angelmummys dirty angelover 19 years ago
Mmm, very hot!

such a way with description. It was as if you were watching them! Cannot wait for more chapters xxx

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
It got me WET!!!

Woderful story; it had me dripping wet before I was half way through. MMMMMMMMMMmmmmmm, I could almost feel like I was right there with "Aunt Martha" (I wish).

Kisses

Jamiesue

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
wonderful

Wonderful, intricate description of fine details known very well to the participating eye (the author), but often lost to the reader. Not here. Excellent variety in sexual positions and activities as well. You are very talented.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Excellent

Finally read this story, and look very forward to its continuation.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
FANTASTIC

That was one of the hottest stories I've read it was great would like toread more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Great reading,!!! Super Hotttt,keep up the sexy work this was over the top!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
nice

Wet and tasty lips rippling against each other: lesbian sex is the best!

MistressCarrieMistressCarriealmost 12 years ago
chapter II

Well certainly, you laid the ground work for chapter II. So? Going to disappoint us?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Fantastic!

This story had it all!

The introduction, the suspense, the clarity of the description of the sexual experience were all well done and calculated to raise my desire to to the limit to be with anoher woman.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
ZZZZZZZZZZZZZ

Lame! To much of the same old same old

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
not bad

Spelling muscles "mussels" is like saying one of the characters in the story has barnacles on their arm.

But the repeated references to how women smell and taste was a turn-on, and something too many writers don't think about.

Faye51BiFaye51Bi3 months ago

Enjoyable, and I’d like to hear about Aunt Martha’s friends

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