by Vixie1231
Spelling muscles "mussels" is like saying one of the characters in the story has barnacles on their arm.
But the repeated references to how women smell and taste was a turn-on, and something too many writers don't think about.
This story had it all!
The introduction, the suspense, the clarity of the description of the sexual experience were all well done and calculated to raise my desire to to the limit to be with anoher woman.
Well certainly, you laid the ground work for chapter II. So? Going to disappoint us?
Wet and tasty lips rippling against each other: lesbian sex is the best!
Great reading,!!! Super Hotttt,keep up the sexy work this was over the top!!!!!
That was one of the hottest stories I've read it was great would like toread more
Finally read this story, and look very forward to its continuation.
Wonderful, intricate description of fine details known very well to the participating eye (the author), but often lost to the reader. Not here. Excellent variety in sexual positions and activities as well. You are very talented.
Woderful story; it had me dripping wet before I was half way through. MMMMMMMMMMmmmmmm, I could almost feel like I was right there with "Aunt Martha" (I wish).
Kisses
Jamiesue
such a way with description. It was as if you were watching them! Cannot wait for more chapters xxx
I loved the buildup to a very hot climax and I hope you will write more about these ladies.